Shawn Anthony complains about Rebecca Chopp's definition of church as a “constitutive community of emancipatory transformation. Among other problems, he doesn't like the words used.

Those words strike me as 6th or 7th grade vocabulary, but then again, I was learning about Special Relativity and uranium decay chains in 6th and 7th grade. Yes, I recognize the words are a bit unusual. At least they're not "church words." We've got a lot of jargon in the church.

Jargon is used by a community to communicate concepts peculiar to that community. At a high power rocket launch, words like "CATO" and "shred" are used. Everyone's hoping they're not used two often, as they're examples of bad things that can happen to that rocket you just put out on the pad that costs an order of magnitude more than you told your husband or wife. But jargon makes it hard for outsiders to join in. Bloggers have their own set of jargon. At the last Blogfest, I caught the waiter looking a little puzzled at some of the snippets of conversation he overheard.

Christian jargon defines who "is" a Christian and who "isn't," acting as a shibboleth. The word "shibboleth" itself is from a Bible story, where the ability to say "shibboleth" vs. "sibboleth" was used to by Gileadites to kill off the Ephraimites. That's the problem with shibboleths: they're used to kill people, either literally or metaphorically. If you don't want outsiders to become Christians, then the more Christian jargon, the better. They get frightened by it and think we're nuts.

Shawn simply defines the church as the "Body of Christ." That's a nice definition that assumes a working knowledge of the books of Paul in the New Testament. It doesn't tell the outsider what the church does. It's Christian jargon. Granted, it's useful and saves time and conveys a lot in a little, which is the purpose of jargon.  But what if you're explaining th church to an outsider?

I've been thinking about how to rephrase Rebecca Chopp's definition. I think it's got a point. "A church is a united community with the power to free people from the things they're enslaved to." That's wordy compared to the original, but let's face it, I'm addicted to "wordy." As I rewrote the definition, I too have the same problem with the definition that Shawn did: there's no mention of God. "A church is a community united in the death and resurrection of Jesus, empowered by the Spirit to free people from sin and the damage caused by sin, and to support each other in the life the Father has prepared for us." Even wordier yet, and it's pretty obvious I'm a Trinitarian, but I like it. In my second definition, I use some words that are "suspect": resurrection, empowered, Spirit, and Father. We live in a society in which the majority do not know the basic stories and concepts of the Bible — what would be called in "emerging church" jargon a "post-Christian society." Resurrection and empowered are known through other uses — characters in science fiction (almost called it SF — more jargon) and fantasy are "resurrected" by magic or medicine and empowered by spider bites or cosmic rays. Spirit might need some explaining; I'm old enough to remember when people still said "Holy Ghost" in my church and others complained that it conjured images of someone in a bed sheet. I know enough people who come from broken situations that the basic concept of "Father" as good, steadfast, and nurturing is one I think of as foreign to most folks, though it wasn't in my case.

At some point, you have to explain some terms, I guess. Of course, Nancy has forbidden me to ever teach genetics again to anyone without at least a degree in biology.

There's something pithy, though, about Chopp's definition. Make it "God's constitutive community of emancipatory transformation" and I'll probably use it at the Youth Group Leader's meeting tonight.Hey, I've got a reputation as a writer to uphold. Occasionally coming up with something incomprehensible is part of the schtick.

BTW: I think I caught all the typos. For some reason, my brain isn't adapting to this keyboard. Forget trying to use the number keys in touch-typing mode. If I missed any errors, I'm sorry and am trying to do the best I can.